Monoudians! plz fix!

x2 Mobius The Frost Monarch
x3 Zaborg The Thunder Monarch
x3 Zeradias, Herald of Heaven (better chance for "The Sanctuary in the Sky"
x1 Breaker The Magical Warrior (spell and trap destroyer)
x2 Cloudian-Altus (for discarding purposes)
x2 Cloudian-Cirrostratus (Destroys monsters)
x2 Cloudian-Acid Cloud (destroys Spell or Trap cards)
x2 Cloudian-Ghost Fog (reveals face down defenses and will help alot of my other cloudians
x3 Cloudian-Sheep Cloud (2 token Stall)*replaceable*
x1 Marshmallon (Defending purposes)
x1 Spirit Reaper (Defending purposes)
___Monsters 22___
x1 Cloudian Squall (Helps my Cloudians to get Counters)
x1 Heavy Storm (Destroys my problems)
x3 The Sanctuary in the Sky (Spirit Barrier Effect for my fairies)
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon (Destroys Spell or Traps that may ruin my plan)
x1 Swords of Revealing Light (Stall)
x1 Monster Reborn (Wheres the Jinzo)
x1 Brain Control (Just incase)
___Spells 9___
x1 Spirit Barrier (defends me form damage)
x2 Final Attack Order (keeps my Cloudians in ATK mode)
x3 Dark Bribe (Negates Spell and Traps)
x3 Solemn Judgment (Negates almost anything)
__Traps 9__
__Total 40__

RATE AND FIX! PLEASE!

3 Zeradias and 3 Sanctuary is overkill run 2, 2, and a Terraforming. -2 Final Attack Orders -1 Bribe +3 BTH. Otherwise, don't know much about CLoudian decks. Also, i played this deck, and won 8000-0 easy-i don't really get the strategy.

The Strategy is really simple To easily summon my Monarchs! My Cloudian monsters (in ATK mode) can't be destroyed. So thats when "Spirit Barrier" or "The Sanctuary in the Sky" comes in. It's a half Beatdown/Discard deck due to some of the effects of my Cloudian monsters.