!! Help !! My Destiny Hero Deck !! Help !!

so guy's i like this deck so much but i cant win allways so i want to make it pretty good so help plz

Monsters - 18

DESTINY HERO - DOGMA x1
DESTINY HERO - DREADMASTER x2
DESTINY HERO - MALICIOUS x3
DESTINY HERO - DIAMOND DUDE x3
DESTINY HERO - FEAR MONGER x2
DESTINY HERO - DEFENDER x1
DESTINY HERO - CAPTAIN TENACIOUS x3
DESTINY HERO - DOOM LORD x2
SANGAN x1
DESTINY DRAW x3
CLOCK TOWER PRISON x3
HEAVY STORM x1
DARK CITY x1
MONSTER REBORN x1
MYSTICAL SPACE TYPHOON x1
LIGHTNING VORTEX x2
DARK BRIBE x3
BOTTOMLESS TRAP HOLE x1
SAKURETSU ARMOR x2
D - SHIELD x3
MIRROR FORCE x1
DUST TORNADO x2
WABOKU x1
DESTINY SIGNAL x2



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Please guys help

take out:
1 Sakuretsu Armor
1 Lightning Vortex (whenever I run it I only run 1 for deck space)
Waboku

Add:
Negate Attack
Magic Cylinder
Damage Condenser

I'm sorry but that's all I can think of. I'm kind of weird about modifying other people's decks because I usually can't modify to the fullest of my abilities unless I've dueled with the actual DECK. But over all, it was pretty good, Aster. (no offense meant by the Aster comment)

no waboku make it threatening roar

Try adding in dark armed dragon, but basically in the destiny dad deck i sold to ice, it focuses on using appropriate-dark bribe-defender-solemn wishes to gain lots of lifepoints to keep you in the game longer as destinys have low atcks and make sure you have time to get Dads out.

But anyway, as i said, destinys have low atck, so defenders or more roars might help/swords of light

me too wanna powerful destiny heros deck with dad

Ok.

First off, you need to add Crush Card Virus.

For monsters, the layout looks fine. Except, run 3x Fearmonger.

I think this deck would be better suited to be a Destiny Field Control Oppression deck..

So. Here are my fixes.

-1 Dogma +1 Fear Monger
-1 Diamond Dude, -1 Doom Lord, +2 Dark Armed Dragon
-1 Tenacious, +1 Snipe Hunter
-1 Defender, +1 Elemental Hero Stratos
-1 Waboku, +1 Threatening Roar
-1 D-Shield, +1 Threatening Roar
-2 Dust Tornado, +2 Book of Moon
-2 Sakuretsu Armor, +1 Torrential Tribute, +1 Smashing Ground


Hope you agree with and can use my fixes.

Deck is great,but u need a CRUSH CARD VIRUS
That is all and Disc Commander but he is banned!!!

So, you don't need him. Meh.

i just changed my deck and im wining

Well i guess you're welcome then.