please help my Alkana deck (king's, queens, and jacks knight fusion if you didn't know)

OK, so I have fun using this deck and I like it, I just think it needs a bit of editing by the trustey (hopefully) population of DAD Academy. Not that I'm hoping for too much, I've seen my other deck posts and they have like
1-3 posts on them XD

Cards: 40

Monsters (20)
Jack's Knight x3
Queen's Knight x3
Freed The Matchless General
Ghost Knight of Jackal
Doom Caliber Knight
King's Knight x3
Blade Knight
Command Knight x3
Royal Knight
Familiar Knight x2
Marauding Captain

Spells (13)
Reinforcement of The Army x3
Lightning Vortex
Swords of Revealing Light
Dark Factory of Mass Production
Future Fusion
Fusion Recovery
Fusion Gate
Polymerization x3
Pot of Avarice

Traps (7)
Wall of Revealing Light
Mirror Force
Magic Cylinder
Bottomless Trap Hole
Dark Bribe x2
Shadow Spell

And now for my 1-3 suggestions . But seriously guys help lol

well ur gunna need king of the swamp and polymerizations to pull this off

I know that you like to have your deck all of Knights, but if you want your deck to work good you must remove some of them

Monsters:

- Ghost Knight of Jackal
- Doom Caliber Knight
- Command Knight
- Royal Knight
- Familiar Knight
- Marauding Captain

+ ELEMENTAL HERO STRATOS
+ ELEMENTAL HERO PRISMA x3
+ D.D. WARRIOR LADY


Spells:

- Dark Factory of Mass Production
- Fusion Gate
- Pot of Avarice

+ BRAIN CONTROL
+ MONSTER REBORN
+ NOBLEMAN OF CROSSOUT
+ THE WARRIOR RETURNING ALIVE

Traps:

They are good. Don't change anything...

True..every good warrior deck i've seen has utilized D.D.s..care for swords of lights?

i tried to amke myself alkana deck
it didnt work prperly

try to help him out or agree with someone and not just post stuff that wont help him wat so ever

but yea i agree with ristar87 but im still wondering bout king of the swamp because hes good for subsitute and to get polymerization but try to make some room for them cause tehy do help with this deck i would give u my deck list but it accidently got deleted for another deck.

gl on getting more posts

[quote="Shadow Warrior]i tried to amke myself alkana deck
it didnt work prperly[/quote]

Sure, you didn't, but that isn't a rate. That's encouraging him to give up on his deck.

I think this deck has potential.. so here goes.

-1 Ghost of of Jackal (blehh)
-1 Royal Knight
-2 Familiar Knight
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+2 Marauding Captain (Great for field control, presence)
+1 Doomcaliber Knight (are you kidding me, this was the prize card for an SJ tournament. Its incredibly good, shuts down DAD, Prime Material, Judgement. Jesus! Combos great with the Warrior Returning Alive)
+1 The Warrior Returning Alive (for DC Knight and general hand control)

-1 Dark Factory of Mass Production
-1 Pot of Avarice
+1 Monster Reborn
+1 Fusion Gate (Marauding Captain gets monsters on the field quite quickly)

-1 Wall of Revealing Light
-2 Dark Bribe
-1 Shadow Spell
-1 Magic Cylinder
-1 Bottomless
+1 Torrential Tribute
+2 My Body as a Shield
+3 Royal Decree

This deck can put your opponent in a good predicament now-it has trap negation, and monster effect negation.

This means all your opponent can use are spells..that's what my body as a shield is for-to negate Lightning Vortex and similar cards.