my six samurai its too bad plz rate and fix

monsters 22
GREAT SHOGUN SHIEN x3
ENISHI, SHIEN'S CHANCELLOR
GRANDMASTER OF THE SIX SAMURAI x3
THE SIX SAMURAI - ZANJI x3
THE SIX SAMURAI - IROU x2
THE SIX SAMURAI - KAMON x2
THE SIX SAMURAI - YAICHI x3
THE SIX SAMURAI - YARIZA x2
MORPHING JAR
SHEIN'S FOOTSOLDIER x2

spells 8
BRAIN CONTROL
HEAVY STORM
MONSTER REBORN
MYSTICAL SPACE TYPHOON
SWORDS OF REVEALING LIGHT
REINFORCEMENT OF THE ARMY x3

traps 12
MIRROR FORCE
TORRENTIAL TRIBUTE
SOLEMN JUDGMENT
DARK BRIBE x3
SAKURETSU ARMOR x2
WABOKU
RETURN OF THE SIX SAMURAI
FUH-RIN-KA-ZAN
BOTTOMLES TRAP HOLE

TOTAL --42--
PLZ rate and fix it cuz this is the first time for making this deck

First -1 Fuh-Rin whatever.

-1 Return of the Six Samurai.

-2 Sakuretsu. +2 Threatening Roar

Allows you to stall, draw one of the critical cards you need, and bam, OTK.

-1 Waboku, -1 Solemn. +1 Lightning Vortex, +1 Smashing Ground

-1 Brain Control, +1 Fissure S.Reaper and Marsh.

Otherwise looks good.

I personally only run Yaichi/Irou/Zanji in 3s. With one Kamon for MoP (Messenger of Peace) support.

AS in taking them out.

I would run a D.Draw engine component in there, but w/e.

Well

After thinking all the fixes i realised it would be easier for me to post the edited deck...

3 Grandmaster
3 Zanji
3 Yaichi
3 Irou
1 Kamon
2 Shogun
1 Enishi
1 sangan
1 cyber dragon
1 exiled force

3 Reinforcement of the army
2 my body as a shield/dark bribe
2 enemy controller/shrink
1 lightning vortex
1 smashing ground
1 fissure
1 mystical space typhoon
1 heavy storm
1 monster reborn

3 Solemn Judgment
3 bottomless trap hole
2 phoenix wing wind blast/raigeki break
1 mirror force
1 torrential tribute