my gadget deck need more work

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MOBIUS THE FROST MONARCH x2
ZABORG THE THUNDER MONARCH
DOOMCALIBER KNIGHT x2
GREEN GADGET x3
RED GADGET x3
YELLOW GADGET x3
EXILED FORCE x2
BANISHER OF THE RADIANCE x2
SANGAN
MORPHING JAR
20-monster

LIGHTNING VORTEX x2
SHRINK x2
BOOK OF MOON x2
NOBLEMAN OF CROSSOUT
HEAVY STORM
SMASHING GROUND
LIMITER REMOVAL
BRAIN CONTROL
11-spell

ROYAL OPPRESSION x2
THREATENING ROAR
MIRROR FORCE
DARK BRIBE x2
BOTTOMLESS TRAP HOLE x2
SOLEMN JUDGMENT
9 traps

it need more works~~~plzz fix it and give some advice

Needs a LOT of work. Gadgets need to run way less monsters. Also, you need to run 42 cards if you run 2s of each gadget, or 45 cards if you run 3s. That's so there is a low chance of drawing 2 gadgets first-turn and missing one of the +1s you could get.

So.. fixes.

-1 green gadget
-1x red gadget
-1x yellow gadget
-2x exiled force
-2x mobius the frost monarch
-1x zaborg teh thunder monarch
-1x morphing jar

[[-9]]

+1x doomcaliber knight
+1x banisher of the radiance
+2x legendary jujitsu master
+2x dd assailant

[[+6]]

-1x limiter removal (works for gadgets, can be dead though if you don't have machines)
-1x lightning vortex( only run in 1s)

[[-2]]

+1x mst
+1x monster reborn
+1x shrink

[[+3]]

-2x book of moon
-1x royal oppression
-1x threatening roar

[[-4]]

+1x torrential tribute
+2x solemn judgment
+1x bth
+2x widespread ruin
+2x sakuretsu armor

[[+8]]

Now it's a 42 card standard gadget deck.

Gooddd!

tHE deCk aFter berthA's FiXes
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sorry bertha but i think its toooooo bad 15 traps?????????
i need more help guys

sorry for double post anyone help my deck plzz

Ok i will

-1 Shrink and -1 Smashing +2 book of moon
+1 Lightning
-2 those couple traps near saku ruin or something like that
-1 royal operssion and -1 nobelman of the crossout +2 Shield Crush

actually thats my deck if u want to fix more!
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this one is better

just

-2 royal opp and -1 roar +3 murading captian , -1 smashing +1 Cyber Dragon ,+3 Chimera fortres

15 traps is good gadgets need to run a lot of traps. Look at the current gadget decks.. they run anywhere from 12-17.

i dont think so ~~~bertha if u fix it with 10 traps at least ! it cant be with 15! in my opinon
how can i win!!

Gadgets fetch other gadgets therefore you'll always have plenty of monsters..You can do okay with a 17 / 10 15 lineup, yes, i know that's 42 cards, but gadgets can't run any thing less than that..

You should -1 Vortex
+1 Solemn Judgement and/or Forced back

Lighting vortex are never useful if you have a another in yur hand, or if you have no hand, so only run 1.