Magician DEck Help and rate

Hello, i made this deck to control 2/3 of the field(mybe three) magic and trap here is the deck

Monsters:22(plus a ritual monster)

Dark Magician x3
SealmasterMeisei x1
Sorcerer of dark magic x1(help lock down the use of traps)
Buster Blader x2
Chaos Command Magician x1
Jinzo x1(to stall till iget Sorcerer of dark magic)
Dark Magican girl x1
Skilled Dark magician x1(to get Dar magician out for paladin)
Skilled white magician x1(to get busterblader out for paladin)
rapid-fire magician x1
Magicians Valkyria x1
Breaker the magical.. x1
Blast magician x1
silent magician 4 x1
White magician pikeru x1
Ebon Magician Curran x1
Old vindictive magician x1
Aprprentice magician x1
magical merchant x1
Magician of Black Chaos

Spells: 12

magicians unte x1
Dark magic curtain x2
Dark magic attck x1
Magic formula x1
Black magic ritual x1
magical stone excavation x1
magical dimension x1
Talisman of trap sealing x1(to stall)
Amplifier x1(to help jinzo stall)
polymerization x1
mystical space typoon x1

Traps: 8

Magicians circle x1
Magicans selection x1
Magical arm sheild x1
magic cylinder x1
magic drain x1
talisman of sealing spells x1(stall)
curse seal of the forbidden spell x1
seven tools of the bandit x1

Fusion: 2

Dark Paladin x2

when i duel i have dead draws and i lose prior to tht turn because of it. Any tips for summon the two major cards paladin and sorcerer of dark magic) and any tips for making this deck 40 cards?, also wonder what i should replace Jinzo with. my record with this deck is 2/6 taking any tips Ty.

ok first of all dark paladin wont help cuz u dont have any dragons in ur deck
so -2 paladin
so - 2 buster and the skilled white one
-polymerization
- ebon and pikeru (useless)
+ another jinzo
-amplifier (dead draws)

idk but i think that ritual is useless too it doesnt have an effect or anything special so i think u must remove him
+1 vindictive and 1 apprentice(monster destruction+defense)
+2 ancient ruling
+1 or 2 magical marrionette
+2 more magical dimension


remove all those seals and talismans (needs so much luck to draw them in same time)
+chaos sorcerer
+1 silent magician lv8
-magican arm sheild
+heavy storm
-magic drain and seven tools of bandit
+2 bribe
-curse seal of forbiddin spell
-magicians unite
+3 solemn judgment (ofcourse)

i think that makes it 45 hope i helped

Stardust Dragon wrote:ok first of all dark paladin wont help cuz u dont have any dragons in ur deck
so -2 paladin
so - 2 buster and the skilled white one
-polymerization
- ebon and pikeru (useless)
+ another jinzo
-amplifier (dead draws)

idk but i think that ritual is useless too it doesnt have an effect or anything special so i think u must remove him
+1 vindictive and 1 apprentice(monster destruction+defense)
+2 ancient ruling
+1 or 2 magical marrionette
+2 more magical dimension


remove all those seals and talismans (needs so much luck to draw them in same time)
+chaos sorcerer
+1 silent magician lv8
-magican arm sheild
+heavy storm
-magic drain and seven tools of bandit
+2 bribe
-curse seal of forbiddin spell
-magicians unite
+3 solemn judgment (ofcourse)

i think that makes it 45 hope i helped

Ahh you just crushed my dreams of Paladins ability negates spells ad sorcererors ability negates traps .... but ill try ttheses ty