Rate and Fix my zombie deck

First of all, sorry if my english sucks! I am from Amsterdam so... :

This is my deck:

Monsters:

Gorz, The Emissary Of Darkness
Immortal Ruler
Kasha
Pyramid Turtle (3x)
Spirit Reaper
Il blud
Despair from the dark
Malevolent Mech
Sangan
Goblin Zombie (2x)
Ryko, Lightsworn Hunter
Mezuki
Plaguespreader Zombie
Zombie Master
Red Eys Zombie Dragon
D.A.D
2 Skull Flames
1 Supersonic Skull Flame
3 Burning skull heads

Spells

Swords of Revealing Light
Zombie world (2x)
Foolisch Burial
Mystical Space Typhoon
Alure of Darkness
Book of life (2x)
Enemy Controler (Its better than book of moon right?)

Traps

Magic Cylinder
Call of the Haunted
Mirror Force
Raigeki Break (2x)
Torrentail Tribute
Bottomless Trap hole (2x)

Ik know i need 1 Burial from a Different Dimension!

In my side i only have Doomkaiser, Stardust dragon And Revived king ha des!