Monarch Deck needs fixing

Monsters:24
3x Mobius The Frost Monarch
1x Thestalos The Firestorm Monarch
1x Jinzo
3x Zaborg The Thunder Monarch
1x Cyber Dragon
2x The Tricky
3x Mystic Tomato
3x Gravekeeper's Spy
1x Twin Headed Behemoth
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Marshmallon
3x Nimble Momonga
1x Treeborn Frog

Spells:11
1x Brain Control
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Soul Exchange
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Monster Reborn
2x Shrink
2x Book of Moon

Traps:7
1x Mirror Force
3x Solemn Judgment
1x Ultimate Offering
1x Crush Card Virus
1x Bottomless Trap Hole

Fusion Deck:3
3x Chimeratech Fortress Dragon

Side Deck:2
2x Granmarg The Rock Monarch


Can you help me with this deck?

-2tricky
-1gravekeeper spy
-1 sword of ligth useless and very random
-1 CCV cuz the there is only one monster that can be target by this card (reaper)
-ultimate offering
-1solemn

+1 breaker
+2bribe
+1Bottom
+brain control one of the most useful card in this deck

Sorry to break it to you but Brain Control is limited. Swords stalls for me to get the monarchs and fight back with them. I might take out one spy, but Tricky I'll keep one. It's a minuscule price to pay to get a monarch on the field. I think I'll remove CCV, but im still thinking about bribes and I think 2 Magic Drains would do better. And Breaker and Bottomless I think I'll add them.

If you are using 3 spies I suggest you add also 1 guard so:
-3 Tomato
-1 Twin-headed behemoth
+1 Breaker
+1 guard
-1 CCV
+1 Torrential Tribute


But you don't have brain control listed in there o_O
So in place of Ultimate offering I'd put brain control.

My bad about brain, if u count the spells u will see one is missing, anyway fixed it now.

i think your problem is too many tribute monsters, you have 8 alone with just the monarchs and jinzo, and not enough monsters to be tributed i say -1 mobius and -1 Zaborg, -1 spy so you don't get stuck with one eff you can't use, now i'm thinking add maybe +3 masked dragons or a card like it so you can still have summons on the field to tribute, and on traps outta personal preference -1 solemn -1 ccv +1 bottomless Trap Hole +1 Dark Bribe

Um ya dont -1 solemn take away ccv add brain control take away ultimate add torrential - twin headed behemoth (to Five Headed) Y dark bribe thts +1 card advantage to ur oppenent i say u keep sole )

1.) add peten the dark clown(x3) and take out all your tomatos.
2.) take out Ultimate Offering and -1 Solemn Judgement, and add 2 dark bribes
3.) Take out CCV, and add torrential tribute
4.) take out 1 Mobius, 1 Zaborg, 1 Thestalos and then add 2 Granmarg (you should have 2 of each of the frost, thunder and rock monarchs)
5.) take out 2 trickys and add 2 thunder king Raioh.
6.) remove Swords and add 1 Soul Exchange