Destiny zombies

I wanna suggestions and rates.
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well i have a deck like this..... but as i'm using 24 monsters in my decks i suggest adding some monsters specially tuners like : 2 Krebons and some monsters like : 1 or 2 Armageddon Knight - 1 Diamond Dude and i prefer adding 1 Mystic Tomato

about spells i think 14 is too much. I prefer -1 Burial From A Different Dimension , -1 Allure of Darkness , -1 Gold Sarcophgus and -1 Foolish Burial if you will use Armageddon Knight

about Traps i suggest adding 1 Return From The Different Dimension

Allure of darkness is the best draw engine for these kind of decks...i don't know why u want to remove allure.anyway.I don't like to have so much monsters,maybe i will add 2 krebons,but im not sure what to remove,burial is very useful in this deck,maybe one of the key cards,she help you to make OTK.Whatever thanks for the comment,anyone else?

Sry for the double post but i think the deck looks better like this:.
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