Need help with my DAD deck

Hi guys, this is my DAD deck:

Monsters:24
1x Dark Nephthys
1x Dark Armed Dragon
1x Jinzo
2x D-Hero Dasher
2x D-Hero Malicious
1x E-Hero Stratos
2x Strike Ninja
1x Breaker the Magical Warrior
1x Snipe Hunter
3x Mystic Tomato
1x Prometheus, King of Darkness
2x Necro Gardna
1x Spirit Reaper
3x Cyber Valley
1x Dark Creator

Spells:9
2x Destiny Draw
1x Reinforcement of The Army
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Monster Reborn
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Smahshing Ground
1x Brain Control

Traps:7
2x Solemn Judgment
2x Raigeki Break
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Crush Card
1x Mirror Force

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Could you please tell me what can I improve at it? I think I'll add a couple of dark bribes but I don't know if that would be the right thing.
Btw, this deck is for KCVDS. And the idea behind it is lock the traps with jinzo, control the grave with necro and malicious, then nuke the field with dark armed dragon and atack for at least 5200 damage with jinzo and dark armed dragon.
And if DAD is destroyed, Dark Creator takes its place.

Nice but heres some suggestions .

-2 Necro Gardna
-3 Cyber Valley
+2 Dimondude more target for D Draw and Tomato
+1 Solemn Judgment
+2 Bottomless

I think that will be good then .

Don't take out Cyber Valley! Or necro gardna!
Those are super sexy grave control!

O_O

-1 Dark Nephthys
-1 Jinzo
-2 Dasher
-2 Strike Ninja
-1 Snipe Hunter
+1 Dark Creator (grave control for DAD)
+1 Fearmonger
+1 Diamond Dude
20 monsters.
-2 Raigeki Break
+1 Solemn Judgment
+2 Bottomless Trap Hole
8 traps, 20 monsters.
+2 Book of Moon
+1 Fissure

Better now.

Don't add Bribes, that card is pretty fail. +1 for opponent. NEVER want to do that.

I wouldnt take out jinzo either since i rely mostly on that card to keep the coast clear for dad. I might take out Nephthys, but Dasher helps enormously at summoning monsters to tribute to get them in the grave. Same with Snipe. Discard 3 darks=dad and maybe 3 cards destroyed with plenty of luck. I'll try the fixes though.

I got 1 question about this deck b4 I continue.
Is your side deck meant to look like that?

Yeah because the side deck is supposed to stop the tribute effects of monarchs. Mask of Restrict+Mausoleum= monarchs are just 2400 atk points vannilla monsters.