Cyber deck (please, guys, I need BIG help!)

I always wanted to be as Zane, he is mu favorite character...i love his Cyber dragon so I always wanted to make his deck, or some deck which is like his. I tried so many times, but, it didnt worked. So, I wanted to stop playing YGO because of that. Than, one guy said me that he can help, He made me something what should be Cyber deck, but, its not as good as I thought it will be. Thats the reason why I need help, coz this is my last chance to continue playing YGO. This is my deck:

TOTAL: 40
MONSTERS:
BATTLE FOOTBALLER x2
CYBER DRAGON x1
PROTO-CYBER DRAGON x3
REFLECT BOUNDER x2
CYBER PHOENIX x2
JETROID x2
CARD TROOPER x1
JINZO x2
CYBER KIRIN x2
A-TEAM: TRAP DISPOSAL UNIT x1
CYBER OUROBOROS x1
CYBER VALLEY x3
SPELL CARDS:

POWER BOND x2
POLYMERIZATION x1
MONSTER REBORNx1
OVERLOAD FUSION x1
BRANCH! x1
DIFFERENT DIMENSION CAPSULE x1
RE-FUSION x1
MAGICAL MALLET x1
FUTURE FUSION x1
LIGHTNING VORTEX x1

TRAP CARDS:

SAKURETSU ARMOR X1
COMPULSORY EVACUATION DEVICE x1
MIRROR FORCE x1
RAY OF HOPE x2
SOLEMN JUDGMENT x2

FUSION:
CYBER END DRAGON x1
CYBER TWIN DRAGON x1
CHIMERATECH FORTRESS DRAGON x1
CHIMERATECH OVERDRAGON x1


thats it. Please, help me...

Well i am not very good in Cyber decks but here are my fixes :

- Put Mystical Space Typhoon & Heavystorm

- CYBER OUROBOROS is not good take it out put MARSHMALLON instead its good for Stalling time.

- How did you Forget SHINING ANGEL !!! you can use it to sumon cyber dragon from ur deck . put three shining angel take out JETROI and Footballer

ok, I will try, and if someone else have idea, just write here...

thanks a lot, Dragonknight....

compare you rs with mine and change what you want.

Mine strategy works all the time

Monsters: 19
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch
1 Jinzo
1 Cyber Dragon
2 Helping Robo for Combat
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
2 Green Gadget
2 Red Gadget
2 Yellow Gadget
2 Cyber Phoenix
3 Proto-Cyber Dragon
2 Cyber Valley

Spells: 13
3 Power Bond
1 Overload Fusion
1 Limiter Removal
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Smashing Ground
1 Fissure
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Giant Trunade
1 Monster Reborn
1 Brain Control

Traps: 10
2 Dark Bribe
1 Dust Tornado
1 TORRENTIAL TRIBUTE
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
2 Solemn Judgement
1 Mirror Force

Total: 42 cards

Fusion Deck: 10
2 Cyber End Dragon
2 Cyber Twin Dragon
3 Chimeratech Overdragon
3 Chimeratech Fortress Dragon

can someone else help me, too?

i suggest you delete your deck and ill pm you a list

Are u sure?! I dont know.....but I only want a Cyber deck,....

Hey, when you can pm a list? if you can, send ,e..kk?

As DaD said you should delete that deck its not a good deck.

ok, I will delete it and than? What than?

i already pm u the list , hope you like it ^^

Okay. I'll make you a list....... don't worry.. with Cyber Dragon being limited, it should be tough to make it EXACTLY like Zane's. Anyway. Here goes nothing .

Reflect/Gadget Opp
20 Monsters
3 Green Gadget
3 Red Gadget
3 Yellow Gadget
3 Reflect Bounder
3 D.D. Assailant
1 Sangan
1 Morphing Jar
1 Spirit Reaper
1 Marshmallon
1 Breaker
14 Spells
3 Shrink
2 Book of Moon
3 Enemy Controller
1 Smashing ground
1 Fissure
2 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 MST
6 Traps
2 Royal Oppression
1 Mirror Force
1 Torrential Trbute
2 Compulsory E.D.

MM. No side deck-YET.