My created cards

This is my first set of cards
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Here are my cards hope u enjoy
Maybe a little rateing of my cards will be nice

Hmm there are alright. They are overpowered, you put a counter icon on a spell. They are too repetitive and some dont match the name or picture at all. Names could use a bit more imagination [Death's Pet Dragon isnt a great name for a card]. Loved some of the artwork but they did not suit the cards

overall needs a lot of work. Sort out attributes, make better names, be less repetitive and more importantly make something tht is not overpowered and people will like
2-3-4/10 No im not being harsh it needs a lot of work

I can understand ur reasoning for saying that ya I probably need to maybe low there abilities a little bit.
What do u mean when u say that the cards names don't match there picture
I thought they did.
More Rates PLZ I want peoples opinions.
Here is the rating scale for all the other people:
1= needs to much work
2= They need a lot of work but there getting better
3= There good cards and they need a little work
4= There alright cards but they could be a little better
5= There cool they don't to much work and I like them
6= There great cards maybe a few touch ups here and there but there great
7= They are fantastic cards no work needed
8= They seem to make a me a little jelous that I can't make those kinds of cards
9= To bad I couldn't think of that
10= I wish they were Mine

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i rate them all togehter as a card set with the rate:

2 or 3/10

So you now know what you have to do ...

~~ The_Dutch_Prince ~~

Looking at your scale... I give it a 1.

Every single one of your cards are broken.
"Takes" is not actual Yu-Gi-Oh card text.

You made too many five and six star monsters with like over 3000 ATK. Good Christ.

You place the fusions required for a fusion first, like this:

">exact name of monster<", ">exact name of monster<"
Effect.

Blue Tornado is so broken I laughed.

When it comes to chance cards, such as Graceful Dice or any other card, Dark Abyss is a tad too powerful.

Dark Angel of Death and Dark Fury are a tad too powerful.
Death Eggs and Serpents are broken. Broken real bad.
Don't get me started on "Dragon Mage".

Hell, you made so many damn cards I can barely criticize them all.

They are completely overpowered, grammar mistakes, and completely hilarious screw-ups with the effect text.

"Monster type monsters"?!?

Now I understand you're thirteen, I could infer because of the dragons and near everything related to "death" with the repetitive and cliche "will do anything to protect his friends" description.

You really should touch up on these cards, BIG TIME. Make more reasonable names... Give them way more balanced attacks... Fix the fusions...

AND TRY NOT TO MAKE LIKE FOUR SETS OF CARDS WHERE YOU HAVE A LIFE/ANGEL DEATH/DEATH OVERPOWERED MONSTERS FUSED TO MAKE LIGHT/ANGEL & DEATH ______.




8l

Devilman dont be tht harsh, yes i know he made a lot of mistakes but it is his first time trying this.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be special summon by having up to 10 different monsters with DX in its name and OpPart Release in your grave.When this card is special summon every card except this card is destroyed and you cannot conduct your battle phase .Once per turn you can special summoned a monster with DX in its name.This card cannot be destroyed in battle and cannot be targeted by spell and traps

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can not be Special Summon except by removing 7 FIRE type from your grave from play and send every card in your hand to the grave. By paying half your life points this card can remove all cards except this card from play.This card cannot be attack by any monsters except WATER type monsters and it is not affect by any spell and trap cards.

Ok people who like to critisize it's only my first post I promise it will get alot better
Now i'm going to sk for people to keep rateing my cards but while doing I want some Ideas for a new deck type then i'll make that deck type and post it to see what people think (Editing and revising included)

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Who is ChaosShourd and why is he hijacking your thread? :l

Also:

SpiTFire96 wrote:Devilman dont be tht harsh, yes i know he made a lot of mistakes but it is his first time trying this.

I'm not being harsh, he's played the game before has obviously seen fusion monsters, synchro monsters, and read their texts. He can easily find out how to write out effects of cards correctly. All it takes is imagination and Google.

It seems to falter in both aspects.

Making three sets of Angel/Life monster + Death monster = Angel/Life & Death monsters.

Plus he should know where to draw the line for good, broken, and "Sixth Sense" broken.

I can provide constructive criticism as I choose, and as far as I can tell I have not made any direct attacks to the user or insulted them, my only goal in the post is to provide criticism and let them know what my opinion is on their works. If that's not apparent to you, then it is not my dilemma.

Devilman I kno that ur Obelisk blue and have more sklls then I do (Right atm)
I have seen Fusion cards I use E-Hero deck frequently and I've also used syncro monsters.
Yes I made ALOT of mistakes yes u have the free will to criticize but the first post u made was a little to much. Yes I probably should've edited and revised the cards and read through more carefully I guess I was just over excited about posting them to see what people think about my cards.


For the deck type responses need more of those but i'm leaning towards Dragon types.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] This Card cannot be summoned or set.This card cannot be special summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field.This Card can attack twice on the same battle phase.if this card's ATK are higher than you opponent's monster DEF then the difference is dealt to your opponent as damage.This card is switched to defense after it attacks.

[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.] This card can only be equiped to Rouge.On the turn this card is eqiuped to Rouge,all mosnters are instantly destroy and Rouge gains 500 points.

horrible horrible horrible, im not even gunna rate them with a number

Here's my second card set Hope u like them
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some are better but most are still broken and overpowered

Thanx for the positive comment

lol 1/10 dis is worse than my first post..

I agree with Malcsom this set is pointless...sorry

Same here sry.

You should work a bit on the way you describe the cards.
Many are over-powered.
Mainly they're fine I guess, You still have to improve some factors though.

Sry dude i still say the same, too overpowered, do not make ANY Sense, some are alright but until youre sure dont put something up dude! Kepp at it though, get over the dragon and death themes, I mean Names have no imagination, just elemental dragon and then an element.

As i said bfore the worst thing about your cards apart from the overpowering is that some pictures dont even match the card name
1/10