My created cards

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This is my first set of cards
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Here are my cards hope u enjoy
Maybe a little rateing of my cards will be nice

If you want help join my YCM Class!
Goto the topic "Classes" on the forum and find YCM Class and it has ham. Once I get enough members I will start teaching.

you really worked hard on these cards man
i'm not gonna say ?/10 but i'd say good work my friend galixygx

Not gonna lie, I laughed at "Elemental Dragon: Tree."

Also,

galixygx wrote:Devilman I kno that ur Obelisk blue and have more sklls then I do (Right atm)
I have seen Fusion cards I use E-Hero deck frequently and I've also used syncro monsters.
Yes I made ALOT of mistakes yes u have the free will to criticize but the first post u made was a little to much. Yes I probably should've edited and revised the cards and read through more carefully I guess I was just over excited about posting them to see what people think about my cards.


For the deck type responses need more of those but i'm leaning towards Dragon types.

Other fusions work a bit differently because they're a tiny bit balanced. As for the first thing, I'm a horrible duelist, so I'd say the rank represents absolutely nothing. My criticism was fine because it wasn't attacking you specifically, only targeted at your cards. If it seemed like I overdid it then you'll have to understand that there are people like me who won't refrain from letting you know that you have some/or even a lot of mistakes.

Also judging by the mass amount of cards, I can't imagine staying excited the entire time. Also, dragon types are real generic. Go for some more original ideas, and look at the text of actual cards and try to find the "grammar" to effects, and how flavor text is formed.

Dudes, he is 13(not that it is bad) and he is learning! U all should support him and help! If u dont like his cards then i suggest u find him in ham and discuss it there, who knows, maybe u can help him! We all should be happy that another people likes making cards, and he made them so many! I see it good that he is trying, and i think trying hard just to make cards and to learn! No one of us didnt born as a pro of everything, and learning is something we all do all the time! I personally like some of the cards while rest needs a lot of work and editing.

So i will say - Keep trying and i am always happy to see that people are trying!
(Grr, that sounded like i was grandpa... sorry guys)

Btw, i am really happy to see that some ppl are trying to help him

One detail you fail to note: Constructive criticism encourages improvement. If learning is something they want to do, then my criticisms are even more justified.

Kiryu i am 13 also -_-lol...anyways i know what you mean but he made so many i really didnt want to point out anything.and galixy GX join or YCM class!

Yes, i agree, but thats more the matter of how people takes criticism at his current age(not that 13 is bad again), but thats not that easy, each people understand criticism more differently, what for one is constructive is not for other! And that wasnt fail to mention but avoiding off that question only because u can never feel as other person!

Well then it's clear to all of us that different people of different ages take criticism differently.

Here's the kicker, she said she'd like it if she got a few ratings. I gave her a rating and even gave her full on criticism. If she finds it too much, then she may either ignore me, or simply not post. This is obviously nothing meant to be offensive. If someone knows that there is level of criticism that they deem too much, and then someone comes by and violates this level, that means that they should anticipate cruel criticism when showing their mediums.

Once again it's for improvement, and I certainly don't care (and it's none of my business) how someone else interprets criticism, but I give my criticism, and whether they listen to my criticism, or they ignore me, or report me, I've done no wrong. That's all I have to say on the subject. I don't want to throw her topic anymore astray.